Looking for help on my Killer Lore Builds

I've been fixated on making lore-based builds (I like theory crafting, and basing builds off the killers lore rather than what's strong or fits their power well is appealing to me), and I could use some help. I've got a google doc here if anyone wants to review them:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AOFfMs8ZqD3T3-DaLCq0kRt-Wn-dy_LW9w_LMMtOeos/edit?usp=sharing

There's a lot of killers I haven't started on yet where I'm not familiar enough with their lore, or I just have a hard time thinking of where to start (In particular the licensed ones). But even the ones where I have made builds for, I would appreciate some feedback, if you think I'd be on the right track or theme, or if I should try something else.