After1/After2/Before
Back again with another edit version. Took all your comments and worked on it again… After1 is a more drastic edit… made to intentionally have a postcard like feel After2 is more natural ( intention at least)
Back again with another edit version. Took all your comments and worked on it again… After1 is a more drastic edit… made to intentionally have a postcard like feel After2 is more natural ( intention at least)